AP Language: Welfare Revision Information

Your revisions for your welfare essay will be due in class on Thursday, October 4. Please make sure that you have highlighted/bolded all changes, included the checklist, and stapled all three parts together for class.

Some additional resources to use:

• Revision Checklist
• Topic Sentence and Thesis cheat sheet
• Naysayers
• General Persuasive Writing Handout
• The Comma

Make sure that your revisions reflect careful work that has been proofread and reviewed carefully.