Don’t forget the Sanders essay is due Sunday at noon.

Do an excellent job. Don’t forget to master the topic sentence structure, offer a STAMPy intro, and provide insightful analysis.

 

Read both of the following articles about Between the World and Me and identify the two best and two worst arguments from each.

Enjoy this solid remix of the Good Morning song.

All the first draft comments will be completed by 6:00 p.m. on Monday in Google Docs and many are already done.

Your revision guide for the essay on unjust laws is available here. Your revision is due in class on Thursday, printed with changes bolded. Only substantial revisions that reflect serious changes will be accepted and no late revisions will be accepted.

While some of you are demonstrating real progress in your writing, there were a number of very disappointing responses in this batch. Please review the revision guidelines and follow those suggestions as well as the comments on your paper when you revise. If you have questions, please come see me.